Literacy

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At school for wonderful writing my 2nd story is about 2 girls who make a deal to stay in a mansion all night. Luckily one gets out if it but not the other........ One of my wonderful writing stories is about a city with no technology

= Trapped =

“I dare you to stay there all night” yelled Jessy pointing to an old crooked mansion.

“Yeah right” I answered shivering. I thought she was joking but I soon noticed she was serous. Knowing the way I know her I knew she was going to tease me. I finally gave in and said yes but only under one condition she would come with me. We decided to meet in front of the creepy mansion. Soon the time came to meet Jessy in front of the mansion. I was all prepared. At least I thought I was.....

I opened the slowly and quietly but the door still creaked. I took a step in and suddenly I shrieked. I could hear Jessy gulp and she probably hoped that I was just teasing. Se closed her eyes as she took my first step in. She probably wanted to run away but a deal was a deal and you can’t break it. As she was slowly lowering her foot a horrible wind blew and knock me and the door. The door slamed close and Jessy was on the ground terrified about what would happen to me. She was lucky she never came in.



= LOST =

“Line up”, shouted Mr Tolpon, the teacher of room 10 Rumples school. Room 10 were on a class trip to a beautiful picnic spot. In the front of the line was Amber, the teachers pet, and her BFF Nicole who was also the teachers pet. Since they were the class favourites they did most of the jobs. There job today was to say Thank you and goodbye to the bus driver. When they had finished the job they went to a path called The Enchanted city. They thought it was a rather odd name for a path. After walking for ages Amber admitted that they were lost. The thought about going back but they were a bit excited on what was at the end of the path. They decided to carry on but Amber was to sure. It was a couple hours later they found a Magnificent city. It looked like a beautiful scenery and everyone was outside either playing outside or working extremely hard. There seemed to be no cars only horses and carriges. Nicole loved the exciting city but she wanted to get home she decided to ask someone to help them get home using a computer or some sort of technology but they had no idea what technology even meant. Suddenly a man shouted we have to technology and everyone went back to work. “NO TECHNOLOGY” shrieked Amber.